Oronte
I am a polite man, friends with many, including the king, and will always love food(especially steak).


I made this little poem, I was wondering if you could give me a review.
The king’s speech was so great,
it made me rethink fate.
That fate is is like a silly chime,
It could change at any time.
And time is but a number
and can be interpreted from one to another.
That is why the movie was so great,
almost as great as a large steak.
I believe that this is a very splendid poem Oronte! You may have wanted Alceste’s opinion, but I felt like you should...
Since you desire it, sir, I’ll speak my mind. This is a good start i think it could use some improvement, like in line 4...